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   Francisco Dominguez & Aire Celeste Norell
   Marie Lecrivain & Angel Uriel Perales
   Sheikha A.
   Steve Abee
   L. Ward Abel
   Carl Abt
   Han Adcock
   Elizabeth Addis
   Aderemi Adegbite
   Adeolu Emmanuel Adesanya
   Neil Aitken
   M.I Akande
   Shahd Al-Shemmari
   Lynn Albanese
   Alaina Renee Alexander
   Scott Alexander
   Gwyndyn Alexander
   Nicole Alexander
   Inalegwu Omapada Alifa
   Maureen Alsop
   Rafael Alvarado
   Steven Alvarez
   Veronica An
   Zack Anderson
   Kristine Anderson
   G.D. Anderson
   Amy Anderson
   Lori Anderson-Moseman
   Grace Andreacchi
   Renae Andruse
   Arlene Ang
   Roger Angle
   Stephen Anstay
   Azure Antoinette
   Theresa Antonia
   Aurora Antonovic
   Maria A Arana
   Carlye Archibeque
   Joseph Armstead
   Feral Artist
   Baron James Ashanti
   Charlene M. Ashendorf
    Askew
   Gregory Austin
   Shawn Aveningo
   maeghanne ayers
   Goodness Lanre Ayoola
   John-Patrick Ayson
   Jim Babwe
   Sophie Bachard
   Vasile Baghiu
   Bridget Bagne
   song-hue bahk
   Michael Baker
   Prerna Bakshi
   Anna Balint
   David Banuelos
   Jared Barbick
   J. Mae Barizo
   Peter Barlow
   Matthew A. Barraza
   James Barros
   Jeni Bate
   Jonathan Beale
   Richard Beban
   Gary Beck
   Gary Beck
   Lytton Bell
   Hakim Bellamy
   Michele Beller
   Laura Bellotti
   Stefanie Bennett
   Hayley Berariu
   Kevin Berger
   Lawrence Berger
   Mike Berger, Ph.D.
   Tom Berman
   luis cuauhtemoc berriozabal
   Craig Berry
   Nick Bertelson
    Besskepp
   Mary Rose Betten
   Cheryl Beychok
   Gwendolyn Beyer
   François Biajoux
   Jarvis Black
   Heitham Black
   Beau Blue
   Rose Mary Boehm
   Bonnie Bolling
   Julie Bolt
   Lek Borja
   Cristogianni Borsella
   Gerald Bosacker
   Amanda Boschetto
   Wendy Bourke
   Jack G. Bowman
   Jennifer Bradpiece
   Bob Bradshaw
   Marcielle Brandler
   Peter Branson
   Sumiko Braun
   Adam Bresson
   Quiana Briggs
   Jack Bristow
   paulo brito
   Alan Britt
   Michelle Brodeur
   Lynne Bronstein
   Charles Brooks
   Adam Levon Brown
   Leah Brown
   Deborah Edler Brown
   Jason Sanford Brown
   zoey brown
   Bob Browning
   Sir Mark Bruback
   MC Bruce
   Jeffrey Bryant
   Kate Buckley
   Robin M. Buehler
   Ron Burch
   Graham Burchell
   Maria Rose Burgio
   Betsy Burke
   Matt Burns
   Richard Burrill
   Tony Bush
   Zachary C. Bush
   Elissa Calvin
   Joseph Camhi
   Dana Campbell
   Don Kingfisher Campbell
   Velene Campbell
   Don Kingfisher Campbell
   Neil Campbell
   Luis Campos
   Janine Canan
   Lyn Cannaday
   Pasquale Capacosa
   Joey Capone
   Hélène Cardona
   Britton Laine Carducci
   D.J. Carlile
   Julia Carlson
   Alicia Carpenter
   Jonathan Carr
   Patricia Carragon
   Oscar Carrasco
   Jared Carter
   Michael Aaron Casares
   John Casey
   Lisa Castro
   Rachael Kelechi Caulker
   Nika Cavat
   Michael Caylo-Baradi
   Steve Ceniceros
   Michael Ceraolo
    Cerise
   Robert Cesaretti
   Cheryl Chambers
   Lita-Luise Chappell
   Shibani Chattopadhyay
   Lisa Cheby
   Beth Cheng
   Ralph-Michael Chiaia
   Juhi Chowdhury
   David Christensen
   Phil Clark
   Terry Clark
   Darice Clark
   Terry Clark
   Charles Claymore
   Jeanette Clough
   Kim Cochran
   Ed Coet
   Tobi Cogswell
   Megan Coker
   Bruce Colbert
   Merrill Cole
   Karen E. Cole
   Christopher Coleman
   Larry Colker
   Beverly M. Collins
   David Concepcion
   Christiane Conésa-Bostock
   Brendan Connell
   Alice Constantine
   Jack Cooper
   Flavia Cosma
   Rachel Coventry
   R. Paul Craig
   David Cravens
   William Crawford
   Natalie Crick
   Rosemarie Crisafi
   Carla Criscuolo
   Chris Crittenden
   Benjamin Crowley
   Susan Culver
   Joe Cyr
   Jim D Babwe
   Morgaine d'Abney
   Karen Corcoran Dabkowski
   Daniel Daian
    Dalton
   Catherine Daly
   Iris Dan
   Marie Lecrivain & Daniel Gallik
   Dan Danila
   Michelle Daugherty
   Piper Davenport
   Kathrine David
   Gareth Davies
   Holly Day
   Frank De Canio
   Gregory De Feo
   Steve De France
   J de Salvo
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   kumari de Silva
   Pijush Kanti Deb
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   Diane Dehler
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   Darren C Demaree
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   Chris Derrico
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   Maurice Devitt
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   Mike Dias
   Martin Dickinson
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   Mark Dixon
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   Rosemarie Dombrowski
   Francisco J. Dominguez
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   Kevin Doran
   John Dorsey
   Marvin Dorsey
   Marvin Louis Dorsey
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   Donelle Dreese
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    Durenda
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   Patricia J. Edwards
   Miguel Eichelberger
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   Neil Ellman
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   Jon Epstein
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   Jake Fleshner
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   Heather Fowler
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   Alex M. Frankel
   Allie Frazier
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   Suzanne Frost
   Delia J. Fry
   Elliott Gabay
   Steven Gabriel
   Timothy Gager
   Daniel Gallik
   J Gamble
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   Jerry Garcia
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   Ulrike Gerbig
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   Steve Goldman
   Vesna Goldsworthy
   Melanie Gonzalez
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   Allison Grayhurst
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   Timothy Green
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   Danielle Grilli
   Brian Grillo
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   Wendy Grosskopf
   Andrew Grossman
   Ro Gunetilleke
   Kenneth Gurney
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   Hedy Habra
   Tresha Faye Haefner
   Matthias Hagedorn
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   Tom Hamilton
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   William Harris
   Matt Harris
   Dawnell Harrison
   J. Alana Hauenschild
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   Guy Hogan
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   lalo kikiriki
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Steve Goldman
May 2004
   

 

A Review of Sarah Maclay?s Whore

University of Tampa Press, Tampa Florida, 2004, $20.00 (hardback)



    A few prior chapbooks exempt, Sarah Maclay’s debut collection Whore is softly stunning. Softly stunning? An oxymoron perhaps, but accurate nonetheless. In this gorgeous, daringly titled and mounted book, and a winner may I add of the Tampa University Poetry Prize for 2004, Maclay’s exquisite control of utterance effuses a mood of quiet, meditative absorption. But the themes and experiences thereby rendered, and the spiritual movements recorded, are of the first level of profound concern. They are so strong in their subtlety of presentation that the effect is like an innocent object (or trope or poem) going off like a time bomb, a soft and stunning time bomb. Maclay intimates, she doesn’t blare, and the power of the misty yet unambiguous intimations can leave you breathless.




    And the poems in this collection are predominantly about love—its nuances and vagaries, its disappointments, yearnings, and glory—either in place, viewed in memory, or again yearned for. By turns we experience love and its disparate sub-species: love longed for, disappointed, joyous, melancholic, ecstatic, and failed. The sure, deftly controlled, even oblique but lapidary language, and the human gravity of the information, fuse as a testament to the vicissitudes of the poet’s heart—and, by extension, everybody’s heart—in the face of that universal baseline: love. And, I hardly need mention, this for the purpose of evocatively re-experiencing your own historic waltzes with Eros past, present, and yet to come…deeply, perhaps painfully, but with redemption as its object.




    Consider these excerpts from “Chiaroscuro” a long poem especially telling in its impact, and quite emblematic of Maclay’s work of this poetically fundamental focus:




   

…Bribe me with your tongue-/

    It consecrates my narcissism.

    Swindle me –

    its deep sarcoma comforts me.

    The singing folds I greet you with

    are not an aberration…




and:




    …Kill me then, you

    with your wet, swift wind,

    with your ecstasy of ragged disappointment…




    Passionate as hell, yet decorous, even demure. I find this recipe consuming, irresistible.




    What is more, Maclay lacks nothing when it comes to improvisation of rendition. In an oddly affecting little poem called “Daphne at the Moment of Transformation” Maclay speaks in the very voice of the classical mythic Daphne, who was changed by Zeus into a laurel tree so she could evade the pursuing Apollo, who desired her. Daphne describes her new estate as a tree and the overall effect has to do with, it seems to me, the perils of love and the sacrifices it may require. Classical reference is no new thing in poetry, of course, but this gritty, sensual trope, which epitomizes the fusion of flesh and nature (“But now, my toenails grow into shale./Veins root. A bleeding rock.”), is a novel slant—and a powerful one.




    Language notwithstanding, and many contend that language is poetry, Maclay has an acutely clear vision of and a firm grip on the conceptual and logical underpinnings, the structure of each poem.




    That said, Maclay also has range of prosodic style. The brilliant title poem “Whore” is a gemlike example of another facet of her ability with a wholly different prosody. No impressionistic, quasi-surreal speech that she uses to such powerful advantage elsewhere here. Instead, here we are confronted with a hard-edged tone of clear logic, a soulful etymology” if you will, a snazzy and crafty etymology of that vexed word, eponymous to this poem and this book. From this analysis comes the concluding sentiment, which fairly leaps out at you: stunning and subtle, but this time not softly. Rather, it is a dazzling “sneak right hook” of a concluding line, almost a proverb, no less perfect for being a moral innuendo encapsulating in one line the huge matters of sex and love and social and ethico—legal pathology. This exquisite and telling little feat of etymological cross-pollination succeeds like a bombshell as a poem, yes, a soft bombshell.




Listen:




   

It comes from hore in Old English

    hora in Old Norwegian,

    but the Latin references charity –

    at the root it’s carus – dear,

    as in Hello whore. Hello dear.

    As in loved one, sweetheart, precious,

    as in rare—therefore….




(Well, I won’t spoil it for you.)




    But Maclay has range of theme as well. In what is perhaps my favorite of the book, “Prayer to the Moon,” we are not on about love, unless you include love of life at all. We are on about 9/11. A prayer for succor. But to the moon? Yes. We seem to need an atavistic rite, primal, pre-deistic, addressed to something natural, palpable and absolutely dependable. Something eternal, vivid enough in its existence to admit of sensory perception, and something that would not desert us. This, as was the practice of primitive man (read us): the sun, the moon as deity. In fact, here the poet re-invokes primitive tribal man, whom we might do damn well to emulate. Indeed, prayer to these sky gods not to go out and thus kill all of life. We need a rite more deep reaching than modern religion can supply, when the God of Abraham was away from his desk that day. The tour d’force of a poem has oblique visual references to the catastrophe, and intimations of both the fragility of life at all and the travail of the soul on earth.




    …O moon, honey in the sky

    Watch over us.



    Even as we pause, suddenly fragile,

    Suddenly kind.




How tender, how forlorn, how beautiful.




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    There are other strong and pervasive elements in Maclay’s poetry, which I can only mention in passing here:




    Consuming sensuality: “A Crescendo of Rain” is a highly eroticized reverie on the processes and perhaps the loneliness of passion, and the reader cannot determine whether of the present, fancied, or past. This gives the poem an a-temporal, sort of eternal quality.




    …Even blue, the sky is full of rain.

    The pavement sweats.



    I learn to suck nourishment

    from your flat, ocean breast.




    The passionate person enmeshed in love, embedded in the natural world. Strong stuff.




    And indeed, the evocation of nature is a major element in Maclay’s oeuvre. I know of no contemporary of mine better at adducing that fusion of nature and soul, paradoxically mirroring each other—a time honored, standard and eternally reliable device of poetry, romantic poetry, (Wordsworth for example)—than Maclay.




Also in “A Crescendo of Rain” we find:




    …A mourning dove

    is moaning something

    I no longer know….

~

    Wind is blowing a flag of begonias.

    Wind is blowing the white gladiolas.

    Ocean of salt, ocean of roses.




    There is much stirring and sustaining value here. But these are not “easy” poems; these poems deepen, rewarding multiple readings. Read them in your strong, quiet, meditative hours—qualities commensurate with this book. Or, put another way, follow Maclay down that shadowy, misted forest path at night, communing with and meditating on love, the light just over the horizon.







copyright 2004 Steve Goldman