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Marie Lecrivain November 2013


Shaindel Beers' The Children's War

This is the end of the innocence Don Henley

Part of the poet's job description is to record historical content and Shaindel Beers' The Children's War (copyright 2013 Salt Publishing), chronicles the loss of innocence through war's violent variations: internal/external genocide, person against society, person against themselves.
The Children's War, as its title promises, provides the reader with a series of brutal ekphrastic poems that successfully extrapolate the annihilation of innocence through children's eyes; either through drawings/paintings made by children who've survived war, or photographs taken of child refugees. As no one, (at least a normal person), reacts to a child's pain without a mixture of anger and discomfort, the first half of The Children's War is almost impossible to read. Beers throws down the gauntlet. Though the language is spare - like a child's - the feelings, the emotions, the empathy stirred within the heart of the reader - are not. There is a primal, raw power in Beers' poems, which can't be circumvented; the reader is put on the spot as a child's pain and loss take center stage, as in the poem After Martija's Watercolor, Croatia:

There are things that can happen that you can't draw.
A soldier ripping off the baby's diaper and slamming him
in tot he wall because it will be easier if the baby
cannot cry. Your mother without a head. Your paint splotches.
Green and blue are peaceful. That was before.
Now, everything is red. The red mixed with the green
becomes a sickening brown. The brown that covered
your thighs when a soldier was done with you.

The second half of the book Other Poems, continue on with the same theme, but on a more universal scale; loss of innocence through love betrayed (Love Poem for the Other Woman'); the discovery that one's parents are human after all (Origins); the loss of childhood talismans at the hands of bullies (Ode to Plastic Ball and Bat), and the loss of one's passion (The Last Ballet Class Before the Operation). Beers narrative tone lightens somewhat in the second half of The Children's War, yet, the poems are just as compelling, and unforgettable.
Clearly, The Children's War is NOT for everyone. It's for the brave reader, one to match the fortitude of a poet like Beers, who offers, unflinchingly, a reminder that while the world we live in is an ugly place, there is still great beauty to be found in the depths of sorrow, honesty, and, in never forgetting our humanity.

The Children's War, copyright 2013 Shaindel Beers, Salt Publishing,, ISBN 978-1-84471-930-3, 67 pages, $15.26

copyright 2013 Marie Lecrivain


Marie C Lecrivain

author's bio

    Marie C Lecrivain is the executive editor and publisher of poeticdiversity: the litzine of Los Angeles, a jewelry designer, and a writer in residence at her apartment.
    Her prose and poetry have appeared in a number of journals and anthologies, including: The Los Angeles Review, Nonbinary Review, Gargoyle, Pirene's Fountain, Orbis, A New Ulster, and others.
    Marie's newest poetry chapbook, Fourth Planet From the Sun, will be published in 2020 by Rum Razor Press. She's an associate fiction/essay editor for The Good Works Review, and the curator of several anthologies including Octavia's Brood: Words and Art inspired by O.E. Butler (© 2014 Sybaritic Press), Rubicon: Words and Art Inspired by Oscar Wilde's "De Profundis" (© 2015 Sybaritic Press), and Gondal Heights: A Bronte Tribute Anthology (© 2019 Sybaritic Press).
    Marie's avocations include photography; meditation; Libers CCXX and XV; marmosets; Christopher Eccleston, H.P. Lovecraft, and Sean Bean (depending on what day of the week it is); her co-owned cat Guinness; misfit and vintage dolls; the number seven, and sensual tributes upon her neck from male artists-except male poets, who only write about it.

    "Writing is like having sex with a beautiful freak; adventurous and uncomfortable to the extreme." - m. lecrivain 2004

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